Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is of paramount importance as much as maternity. there is an idea that women are solely responsible for making a decision about having a

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or not, for

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reason,

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are responsible for the upbringing of a

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. I am completely disagreeing with

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idea. I believe that

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and

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are responsible for involving in the

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process of having a

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or not. Because

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of them will have their own duties in the breeding process.

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, parents should precisely consider the challenges which they may cope with after the birth of their

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,

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as caring, financial and educational challenges.

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, if a couple cannot manage their budget and

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the basic amenities of their future

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, they should

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think and decide about it together. They should think about the peripheral aspects of their decision cooperatively.

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, parents should share their tasks after bringing a

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, because

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are responsible for all peripheral issues of the

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from birth to his or her adulthood.

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, governments should help in

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case. Because, in some countries, just

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have maternity leave for the period of pregnancy and a year after, and there is no

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leave for

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.

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, most

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are more solely responsible for their

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than

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.

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time is difficult and

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for

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, as they should do all tasks lonely. In order to help

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,

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should do their tasks and it is better to have

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leave as well for caring for the newborn baby.

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, parents impact their

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, so, they should consider their influence in nurturing their

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and try to cooperate with each other in bringing their

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up. In conclusion, I believe that fatherhood and motherhood should be considered equally important.

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fathers

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and

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are responsible for deciding to have a

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to upbringing and nurturing their

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to adulthood. Governments

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should help in

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case by giving

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leave to

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.