You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: – Explain that you have completed your studies – Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code – Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Parent, I hope that you will be doing great and as well as other family

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members

menbers

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members

. It gives me immense pleasure to invite you to attend my convocation

that is

going to

be happened

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happen

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month on DEC 21 as I have completed my

bachelor

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degree in Economics with

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grade.

Finally

, the dream has

came

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, that I shall be the

first

person from the family who will be

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graduated

graduted

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graduated

from a

forgien

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foreign

Unviersty

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University

. Apart from that, let me give a brief information about

graduation

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ceremony,

event

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will take place in

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university

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the unversity

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unversity

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university

autotraium hall at 5PM on December 21. . In terms of dress code, there

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restriction

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therefore

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, you can attire our regional dress so that, we can represent our nation culture too.

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university

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the university

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has provided me

four

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tickets. Tickets are for parents and

first degree

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of relatives if younger brothers want to join you they are most welcome. I hope that you are able to join my convocation

this

is not only make

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proud but

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you will be delighted too. I look forward

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from your side. Best Regards Misbaha

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

187 words

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific world, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to help employees perform better in their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the government should spend more money in putting in more works of art like painting and statutes in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

task 2: Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?