People in major cities suffer from high levels of air pollution that causes health problems for many. Explain possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

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Major cities have a lot of opportunities for working, studying or getting to experience different types of entertainment. A big
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for these places is
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pollution and the health issues that can be caused by it. In
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I will be discussing how
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phenomenon is caused and what can be done to improve or even solve it. First of all,
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pollution can play an important part when talking about lung problems.
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is essential for every living being in the world so if it's unclean it can lead to bigger problems
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difficulty breathing, coughing, asthma and others.
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why checking the
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quality more often could be a great way to know when a face mask or another additional safety gadget is needed. Decreasing the
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of vehicles and factories in a closely habited area and planting more local plants is
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a good way to cut down on the amount of rubbish in the
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in major cities. Second of all, polluted
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can increase the possibility of
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problems. To illustrate rashes, itching
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or even sores are more likely to develop and heal slower in an area with a polluted atmosphere. Regular visits to a dermatologist should be a necessity, but eating a proper diet and getting enough sleep could
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routine can be a big help as well because if one's
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is taken care of it tends to soak up
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toxins from our environment.
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pollution is a serious matter and can become a huge problem.
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