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Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How could these problems be reduced?

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There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether excessive online gaming is harmful
for
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 children. In
this
 essay, I will explain why
computer
games
 might induce mental or physical health issues, and provide several solutions on how parents could cope with
this
 problem. To start with, these days addiction to
computer
games
 is classified as a mental disorder that, if not treated, could seriously harm a
child
's brain. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that these
games
 lead to a range of psychological issues.
For example
, a killing-shooting game induces toxic qualities in
child
behavior
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 like aggression, anger,
uncompassioness
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compassionless
uncompassionate
 and
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outbursts
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out-bursts
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 of emotions.
Nevertheless
, it teaches them bad values,like- murdering or hurting people is nothing wrong.
Secondly
, playing too many
computer
games
 harms a person's physical health. It is easy for a
child
 to get hooked on an easily accessible source of happiness, and when online
games
 are introduced to them, they no longer want to do anything else. Sitting all day hunched by a
computer
 screen damages a variety of
human’s
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 spinal bones. To add
to
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thisto
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, it is important for a growing organism to get a good amount of physical
activities
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, for their bodies to grow correctly.
Accordingly
, it would be generally advisable for a
child
 to not get lost
into
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computer
games
, and be introduced to other, fun activities. My advice for parents would be that they should monitor what type of
games
 their children are playing, and should not let them indulge in violent
computer
games
.
Other
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 input, to reduce physical harm, could be that when a kid is playing an online game, they should be presented with a proper
set up
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, like a comfortable, healthy chair and an adjustable desk. To sum up, high use of
computer
games
 could damage a
child
's psychological and physical health. They could start to be aggressive,
angry
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and angry
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, and they could damage their spine if they play them too much. These problems could be reduced by monitoring what type of
games
 they are playing, and by supervising their posture.
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