Success in business can be assured if you have great marketing and promotion. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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, advertising, by promoting and marketing,is the key
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success
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success
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any business. I
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agree with
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different
diffrent
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different
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to
expond
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expand
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the features of the
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costumer
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, increase significantly
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sales. The buyer gains information about the item through the company itself, which encourages the person to buy it.
for example
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iphone
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iPhone
annualy
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annually
promotes the new
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phone, via
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,
although
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characteristics
characters
characterists
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characteristics
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it
pursuades
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persuades
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addicters
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the vivid and vibrant
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used in promotions, have a visual impact on the viewer,
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a result,
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impregnant
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image pushes him/her to buy it.So the financial expenditure subsidized in the adverts,have the scope to boost the income of the company. Needless to say,
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firms that invest in commercial adv have nearly 50% more
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that the ones that use word of mouth.
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product
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people recognise the brand name and the
product
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,for
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model and
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, which are lady's
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bag
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. In conclusion, the promotion of a
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situation for both the company and the customer.
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