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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as paper, glass, and cans. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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It is true,
people
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 produce a lot of garbage together, and in some
countries
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, they do not recycle material
that is
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 still useful
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 as cantons, bottles and jars. The mean reasons those
countries
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 struggling are not collecting are the cost and problems with collecting the
materials
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.
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, the cost to collect reusable
materials
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 is very high. It is cheaper to bring it to the dump yard than
instead
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 processing it as recycling
materials
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.
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, they need to be picked up and bring it to the recycling distribution
centre
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, and at the
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centre
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 all the
materials
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 need to be processed. A solution can be money motivated the
people
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 with money and
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 way they can bring recycled material to the
centre
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. If they put a fee on
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this
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materials
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people
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 are more willing to separate them and bring them to the collecting
centre
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.
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, not all
countries
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 have the resources to separate
materials
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 and reuse the
materials
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 in new products.
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 is a worldwide problem because those
countries
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 use all the trees and get the
materials
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 out of the ground still there is nothing left in the future.
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,
countries
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 need to help invest in other
countries
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 to get those machines.
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, they will be no effect in the long term for a better world. In conclusion, there is a lot of material
that is
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 reusable. To collect all the recycling
people
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 need to be motivated with money by putting fees on the bottles and plastic, and
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 it is a worldwide problem where
countries
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 need to invest to make it possible for other
countries
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.

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