You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, • Let your landlord know that you will be leaving • Thank you landlord for his/her help • Tel him/her about your friend

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Dear Mr Verma, I am one of your tenants and writing

this

letter to inform you that I need to vacate your apartment as I have got a promotion and

therefore

I am moving to a new city. I am really grateful for all your help during my stay. You kept me like a family member. Whenever I was short of groceries or vegetables, you always offered me a helping hand.

Moreover

, I was able to survive in

this

country only because of you.

Initially

, when I was new here, you told me about all the directions and traffic rules in detail so that I can drive on my own to the office. As I had a great tenant experience with you, I want to recommend your property to one of my friends who is looking for accommodation nearby. He is a kind-hearted and disciplined person and I assure you that you will not get any complaints about his behaviour. Kindly consider him as your

tenant after I leave. Yours faithfully, Ramesh

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

173 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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