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Museums should display art of their own country, or they should display art from all over the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

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Before showcasing a piece of artwork, a
museum
 does not have to see whether it is of national or international origin. People visit museums with the sole objective of discovering inspiring pieces of work and they are unlikely to have
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 preference for works of any particular country.
Instead
, most visitors want to see works from all countries displayed in a
museum
 as it makes a visit worth their time and money. Of course, museums should have dedicated sections for national
art
.
Otherwise
, many of these
art
 forms run the risk of getting lost. Even in
this
 age of the internet, a
museum
 is still the best source of information on arts, culture and history. Visiting a
museum
 gives people an opportunity to see objects of historical importance or exceptional beauty in person.
This
 experience is totally different from seeing the images of these objects online. The main reason to display foreign
art
 is to provide local people
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 opportunity to see them. Not everyone can travel to Paris or London or Amsterdam. If works of all nations are displayed in a
museum
, everyone gets an opportunity to admire them.
Also
,
this
 fosters better understanding among nations. It
also
 attracts more tourists. In short, the main objective of
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 should be conserving and promoting
art
 and culture regardless of whether it originated in their own country or elsewhere.
Hence
, I believe that museums should display artworks from all over the world.
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