The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The diagram presents an overview of key stages involved in the manufacturing of

brick

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from three different raw materials

such

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as sand, clay, and water. The whole process of

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production starts when

clay

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the clay

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is dug from the ground. Following

this

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, dug clay is filtered through a mental grid so that any impurities can be removed before being rolled to the following stage. After

this

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, sand and water

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added to

this

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process before either

cut

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being cut

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by a wire or

molded

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moulded

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in order to make the product have the

desirable

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shape and both tactics are used to produce bricks. After that,

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brick

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the brick

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is moved into the drying oven and is dried in an oven

from

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1 to 2 days before being heated in 2 levels of heat in a kiln which are 200-980 and 870-1300 respectively. After that, it

is went

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into a cooling chamber to reduce heat

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two to three days.

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, a penultimate stage which is

packaging

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the packaging

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is carried out. It

then

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leads to the final stage of the process where

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brick

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bricks

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are delivered to the market.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

fuel consumption
renewable energy
emissions
electric vehicles
low-income families
commute
fuel-efficient technologies
public transport infrastructure
global disparity
developing nations
alternative energy sources
sustainable practices
economic impact
conservation efforts
environmental sustainability

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

art classes, such as paintings and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is a good idea to continue to work at their old age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In many countries, an increase in crime has been blamed on violent images on television and in computer and video games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Buying things on the internet, such as groceries, books and air tickets is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages.