The key solution for the enviroment issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extant do you agree or disagree.
Many things are
sacrificing
by humans for their personal interests. It is not good for Wrong verb form
sacrificed
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environment
Correct article usage
the enviroment
enviroment
. Global warming as well as ice melting, sea levels are rising. Correct your spelling
environment
Although
should people continue to developing
day by day. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
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develop
Although
our life developing have
on influence to Change the verb form
has
enviroment
. Correct your spelling
environment
However
we do not stop Add a comma
,However
this
movement because this
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degree
digree
to reach it did not take long. Correct your spelling
degree
For example
China country. This
country gained independent
in 1912 Replace the word
independence
in
now the most developed country. If they Correct your spelling
is
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reduce
refuse
reduse
their own expenditure, they can not be said before as each case has it is own outcome. So if we stopped Correct your spelling
reduce
this activities
what is being created the Change the determiner
this activity
these activities
next
generation
may fail thus
some problems Replace the word
affecting
effecting
the Correct your spelling
affecting
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environment
enviroment
should not Correct your spelling
environment
to
affect Change the verb form
apply
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our
iur
work. Correct your spelling
our
However
we do not forget it. We Add a comma
,However
emitting
greenhouse gases into the atmosphere which Wrong verb form
emit
causes
global warming and a rise in Correct subject-verb agreement
cause
seawatet
levels Correct your spelling
seawater
sea water
to
we should restrict the use of cars and use public transport as much as possible. Correct your spelling
so
This
is economical to
the car owner as well because he would be saving money Change preposition
for
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on
og
fuel. Correct your spelling
on
Although
it requires some efforts
from the current Fix the agreement mistake
effort
generation
they do not cause discomfort in any manner.
To
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In
conclusion
it is true that the current Add a comma
,conclusion
generation
has to make lifestyle changes to Correct your spelling
reduce
reduse
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reduce
environment
issues. But I disagree that these changes have to Replace the word
environmental
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reduce
reduse
the comfortable level of the current Correct your spelling
reduce
generation
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite