The key solution for the enviroment issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extant do you agree or disagree.

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by humans for their personal interests. It is not good for
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environment
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enviroment
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environment
. Global warming as well as ice melting, sea levels are rising.
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should people continue to
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day by day. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
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our life developing
have
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on influence to
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environment
.
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we do not stop
this
movement because
this
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degree
digree
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degree
to reach it did not take long.
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China country.
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country gained
independent
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in 1912
in
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now the most developed country. If they
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reduce
refuse
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reduce
their own expenditure, they can not be said before as each case has it is own outcome. So if we stopped
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what is being created the
next
generation
may fail
thus
some problems
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effecting
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affecting
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the
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environment
enviroment
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environment
should not
to
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affect
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our
iur
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our
work.
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we do not forget it. We
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greenhouse gases into the atmosphere which
causes
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global warming and a rise in
seawatet
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seawater
sea water
levels
to
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we should restrict the use of cars and use public transport as much as possible.
This
is economical
to
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the car owner as well because he would be saving money
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on
og
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on
fuel.
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it requires some
efforts
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from the current
generation
they do not cause discomfort in any manner.
To
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conclusion
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it is true that the current
generation
has to make lifestyle changes to
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reduce
reduse
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reduce
environment
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issues. But I disagree that these changes have to
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reduce
reduse
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reduce
the comfortable level of the current
generation
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