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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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I am writing
this
 letter to aware you of the topic you have discussed in the national newspaper.
However
 , I do not definitely agree about it.
First
,I totally agree that all the
town
centres
 of my country are similar to each other.Since Inda is one of the colonies of England,our culture is influenced by England in numerous ways.
For instance
,all vital buildings in
centres
 are made of stone and wood.
Secondly
,there are lots of green spaces and statues in all
centres
.
However
,from an architectural point of view,my
town
centre
 has its own spectacular building which is so different from other
centres
.
In addition
,my
town
centre
 is situated near the river which differs from others.Since
,
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others are situated far away from the river because of the perils that it might cause.
In addition
,there are no luxurious shops in my
centre
 . In
this
 letter, I made an effort to clarify that my
centre
 of
town
 is so unique-built.To
further
 information,I would like to present you with a guided tour which will be held monthly on
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. Yours faithfully Tala Najafi
Submitted by tala.allamenajafy on

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