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In some countries young people move in their own homes in early twenties, in other countries they live with parents longer. What do you think, do the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages?

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İn recent years, Many different cultures are getting altered day by day.
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 might affects directly youth generation. Some suggestions have shown that having both advantages and disadvantages. Especially Some countries which do not improve heavily reliant on families might reflect
independency
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 alongside young people. A South
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Korea
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,
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and Japanese
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population
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populations
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 are completely different from other societies. They are
cool-headed
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 population and not warm-hearted as some countries like turkey , middle east. That s why when they grow
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 ages of 18 to 20, they abandon their parents. ,
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this
 provides them stronger and more powerful in society. Because they might have status in society and suffer from the cost of living. these generations would easily deal with each problem and gappy.
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 some countries never realize when the young reach
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 of 18 to 20
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