Nowadays , the
development
of the
internet
has changed the way we
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and the majority of
people
have the chance to become a known person
such
as famous on social media . Some
people
argue that a
lot
of drawbacks to being famous .
OthersCorrect quantifier usage
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people
believe it is a positive
development
. In my
I completely agree
this
development
will bring a
lot
of benefits, and in
this
I will explain why and draw my own conclusion.
First of all, the
internet
and TV has improved our
life
and made them easier to live.
This
is because the majority of ordinary
people
now can easily become famous and have many fans on social media
such
as Snapchat , Instagram and TikTok, and they can have and bring a big amount of money from
this
.
For example
,
people
who work in an international company do not get high salaries and their salaries are between 3000 to 5000$ which is not enough to live today, and the
internet
gives them the opportunity to gain a
lot
of money by just taking a picture of their
life
and download it for everyone to can see.
On the other hand
, despite the benefits points of being ,famous there are a few disadvantages to
this
.
Firstly
, that might provide dangers for the famous’s
life
. The reason behind
this
is there are many
people
who are creasy or psychopaths that might track them anywhere .
Secondly
, actors and ,singers who are popular do not have a private
life
and they should show their
life
to the world and explain to them every single detail Of their
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which is extremely hard for humans .
For instance
, they can not have a private moment with their family or friends in a luxury restaurant without
people
around them .
In conclusion ,
although
the
development
of the
internet
and being famous easily can bring a few drawbacks. The majority of ordinary
people
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rich now and have a
lot
of benefits of because the
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.
Therefore
I believe that the positive sides outweigh the negatives .