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In many countries, people do not recycle waste materials, such as paper, glass, and cans. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

#countries #people #waste #materials #paper #glass #cans
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wide range
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countries nowadays,
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 are not encouraged to recycle their leftover materials ,
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cans etc.In the following ,essay we will discuss what are the reasons for
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 and what could be done to solve
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 issue.
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 with the reasons for
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 dilemma,one main reason is the lack of awareness among the
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 themselves of the recycling concept.
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 in developing countries do not have the culture to separate paper ,glass and cans from each other , they just throw the whole garbage in the trash can ,which they could find a non-essential task to do or even
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 their time .Another reason is
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 the economic situation in other countries , the recycling process is expensive.
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 they may not have a place or area to throw their
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,which by default causes diseases like cholera or malaria
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,having the option to recycle will be a complicated demand. The solution
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information or leaflets showing how landfills with plastic bottles and bags, glass or paper packaging hurt the environment and how
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 issue can be solved by recycling.
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 administration should add more opportunities for the correct utilization.
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 the Moscow Subway illustrating ecological problems has grown. Now you can see them on almost every train next to the doors.
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 , the private company “RusEco” added special stands for different types of
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 material in remote neighbourhoods of Moscow. In a nutshell,
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 should be aware of the importance of recycling no matter what
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their economic status.Plus, governments as well should raise the awareness of their citizens
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,to help increase the recycling of materials .
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