Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we longer pay attention to it. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that
advertisements
are really valuable to promote business by appealing
people
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, while others believe that publicities are so causal that no one cares
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. In my opinion,
although
advertisements
do not attract many
people
because to them products are presented in
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way
,
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I believe marketing can be hugely successful in grabbing
people
’s interests. Many
people
around the globe, do not take
adds
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serious
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way
. They opt
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view that items, products, and services marketed in
advertisements
seem to be fancy and often do
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n ot
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not
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reveal the reality.
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, in marketing
the
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fast food, the items
such
as pizza or
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are presented in a
way
to look so delicious and loaded with many ingredients. But in
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approach
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they are not found as good as they appear. So that ‘
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people
take
advertisements
in a common
way
. Marketing can be a real weapon to pull
people
and boost
the
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sales. It is natural that many
people
buy
those
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what
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they are
being
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attracted to. Many
people
found observing
for
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new products, venues, companies and dishes and
therefore
different businesses can take
this
as
opportunity
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an opportunity
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to persuade
people
to buy them. It is
the
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fact that countless giant multinationals spend a specific budget on
adds
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ads
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.
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for instance
,
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observed significant growth in
their
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drinks by putting resources
on
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marketing.
Therefore
, advertising can be an effective mode to enhance sales. In conclusion,
although
some
people
believe
advertisements
are not so productive as they lack reality
but
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in my opinion marketing tools are really worthy to increase sales as
people
are often inclined to what they see or read.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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