In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

It has been noted that

homes

are scarce and so

families

are beginning to move to the

countryside

to erect new

homes

. While

this

occurrence has its advantages like

development

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the development

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of these

areas

, living in a serene

environment

and being closer to nature, there are disadvantages that outweigh the advantages. These disadvantages include loss or reduction in

areas

where

families

can go

to

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for recreational purposes, wildlife in these

areas

would

loose

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their

thier

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their

habitat and probably go extinct and increase

in

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deforestation. Many

families

like to visit the

Countryside

once or twice

the

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year as part of a Vacation or for recreational purposes,

this

enables them to rest from their busy

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work life

worklife

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work life

in the city.

This

will not be possible if

homes

are constructed in the

Countryside

, as the purpose of rest and serenity will be obliterated because the

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presence

prescence

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presence

of buildings and

homes

will convert

this

formerly serene

environment

to an

environment

close to that of a city.

Secondly

, a lot of

animals

like rabbits, snakes and squirrels inhabit the

Countryside

. Putting up buildings here would mean

destruction

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the destruction

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of the habitat of these

animals

,

thus

these

animals

will be homeless and most probably killed by the occupants of

this new residential

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this new residential area

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areas

as

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the

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would see them as pests and a disturbance. Many of these

animals

could go extinct in

this

process.

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, deforestation will be on the increase, as definitely, trees and bushes will have to be cleared for these residential structures to be put up.

This

could bring about

loss

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the loss

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of valuable greenery and

increase

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in the amount of

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carbon dioxide

carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

, as these trees and bushes are useful in converting

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carbon dioxide

carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

to

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oxygen

oxyen

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oxygen

. In conclusion, it is important that the

Countryside

remains as it is, as a means of preserving our

environment

and preventing the disadvantages listed above.

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building

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buildings

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can be built in the cities where

families

can make their

homes

.