Nowdays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

We can't deny that the number of
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rubbish
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to increase rapidly these they. All the
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are being thrown away from all over the world. It can be in different sizes where some of it can be easy and take only a few moments to demolish, while others are more types of
trash
or hardly destroy. In short, I agree with the statement and the main point will be expressed in the following paragraphs. The
first
point is the rule for the resident to recycle. It can clearly be seen that many countries and cities around the world
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not take it serious about
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, which leads their people to
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away
trash
in different areas.
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, left their waste product in public or
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areas and create negative consequences for the animals. Even though
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they might have a recycle in many locations but it
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it hard to demolish due to the variety of
trash
which require individuals ways to destroy. A related point is the education system. Due to the fact that we do not give enough lessons to the younger generation to consider
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nature, so they don't know the
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consequences of producing too much rubbish, despite they
also
have the effect from
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but still not that obvious.
However
, in the
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it might
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worst and it would be too late to turn back. To clarify the policy that the government can do to help
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this
mess. The best way is to create a law for recycling with expensive fines if someone breaks.
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will prevent people from being selfish by not caring about the public and the environment.
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, society will
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the younger generation to follow the rules. Eventually, all the waste will be less
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. In conclusion, the fact that more rubbish
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producing
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is because many countries do not take it seriously about recycle and
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a low-quality education system to the younger generation. Personally, the solution is to set up a law about
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with a huge punishment if they
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it, so people will be considering about throw away
trash
more carefully.
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