A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear sir, I am writing to you about an article that you published in your magazine ‘the

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that

influence

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most’

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. I decided to share my opinion about

this

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book

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and I wish to help humans by introducing

this

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book

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. It was written in 1990 by Italian writer ‘Jo Mo .

books

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name was ‘power of

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’ . The writer

had

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mentioned to positive and powerful

mind

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. When I was

student

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, I missed my ground parents in an accident . so , I felt too sad and I would prefer to be alone all

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apply

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day. One of my best

friend

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introduced

this

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book

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. I started reading and day by day I was feeling better . It said ‘everything you think about it will happen

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and

you

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mind

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make

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your life. You should think

positive

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positively

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to be successful ‘. I started

practicing

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and I saw its effect

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my life. Strongly , I suggest people

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read

this

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book

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and I am sure that it guides adolescents and

teenager

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teenagers

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to learn how to have a powerful

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and how their

mind

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can change their life and future.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

191 words

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