You have seen a advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and after look after their six year old child. Write a eletterto the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the Job

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your recent advertisement in the Australia Today magazine, on the 3rd of March. Despite being my

first

job outside my native, I think I would enjoy it because I like travelling and exploring new places. Australia was always been on my travel destinations bucket list.

Also

, I would gain experience working in a different society and culture, which would be an add-on to my resume.

Furthermore

, I believe that I would be a suitable person for

this

job for two reasons.

Firstly

, I was a student of anthropology and have studied a lot about Australian people and culture. I can easily blend with your family from the

first

day of my work.

Secondly

, I have a certificate in babysitting along with four years experience of working with different families in India.

Therefore

, you would not have to worry about your child being in the hands of a novice.

However

, during my free time, I would prefer to visit different tourist attractions in Australia,

such

as beaches, deserts and wildlife centuries.

Additionally

, I am an epicure and would explore different restaurants and eateries to try Australian cuisine. If you have any

further

questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Yours faithfully, XYZ

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

223 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have seen a advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and after look after their six year old child. Write a eletterto the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the Job

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards learning. Why does this happen? What are the solutions?

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