Write a formal letter of complaint about holiday resort
Dear
Mr.
Smith,
I am writing to express my great dissatisfaction with the service of the holiday resort we stayed at. My travel agent recommended it to us, but we are not satisfied at all.
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Mr
Firstly
, the mom we were checked in was
with dirty bed sheets the floor was not moped and the Unnecessary verb
apply
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nightstands
night stands
were full of garbage.
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nightstands
Then
the restaurant served my boyfriend and I
stale food for dinner and the fizzy drinks were not fizzy but half cola half water.
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me
Also
the waiter refused to give me a fresh plate of food and fizzy enough drinks
On top of all that, the manager of the reception did not pay any attention to the difficulties we shared with him. He told us to just calm Add a comma
,Also
and
enjoy our trip Change preposition
down and
instead
of making problems with the cooks and the staff of the resort.
My boyfriend and I demand a full refund without any other types
of apologising. We Fix the agreement mistake
type
also
will not be returning to this
resort under any circumstances. I think it would be best if you get together with the staff and solve all the problems for the customers after us.Submitted by taniadim74 on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
