Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Nowadays,globalization make numerous opportunities for individuals to move to
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cities or nations around the globe.
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,there is a majority of citizens
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prefer to keep living close to their birthplaces.I profoundly trust that spending the rest of our lives close to birthplacesplaces could deteriorate our futures.In
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,essay some pros and cons will be provided,before a logical conclusion is drawn. On one hand,
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contain
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several benefits.
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of all,individuals who decided to keep their lives close to their
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birth places
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have
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chance to meet their parents and relatives , so they would not get homesick ,and they mostly feel
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.
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,once they come back home,there are parents who have
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enthusiastically waited for them with a warm welcoming hello.
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,they could flourish their profession in their
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birth places
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or even they will be able to enhance their hereditary jobs which
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inherited from their parents and grandparents.
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,they believe spending
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whole
life
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close to
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the birth
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birth place
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birthplace
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bring
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them
through
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more prosperity and joyfulness in
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,there are numerous disadvantages which should be considered.
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,living close to their
birth
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places could deprive individuals of gaining new experiences especially if they are living in a less-developed country I mean
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third
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-world country.
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,mostly being near
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their birth
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birth place
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birthplace
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make
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them become dependent people who could not make their
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decisions
descisons
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decisions
on their own.
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,they might experience a being adequate and awful feeling .
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, a recent poll by Canada magazine found that most
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immigrants suffer from mental diseases
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as depression and
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. To conclude,spending
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the rest
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of
life
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close to where we were born
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conclude
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in
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the
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number of pros and cons .
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living
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the rest
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of
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life
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in another place might have some disadvantages ,I personally think our
life
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worth
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to be
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a bit risk-taker .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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