Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
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of all,individuals who decided to keep their lives close to their Linking Words
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birth places
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chance to meet their parents and relatives , so they would not get homesick ,and they mostly feel Linking Words
self-confidence
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Secondly
,they could flourish their profession in their Linking Words
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birth places
or even they will be able to enhance their hereditary jobs which Correct your spelling
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Moreover
,they believe spending Linking Words
the
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their
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the birth
birth place
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birthplace
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brings
through
more prosperity and joyfulness in Change preposition
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life
.
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On the other hand
,there are numerous disadvantages which should be considered.Linking Words
First
,living close to their Linking Words
birth
places could deprive individuals of gaining new experiences especially if they are living in a less-developed country I mean Use synonyms
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Secondly
,mostly being near Linking Words
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their birth
birth place
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birthplace
make
them become dependent people who could not make their Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
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decisions
descisons
on their own.Correct your spelling
decisions
In addition
,they might experience a being adequate and awful feeling .Linking Words
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immigrants suffer from mental diseases Correct article usage
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number of pros and cons .Correct article usage
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living Linking Words
rest
of Correct article usage
the rest
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life
in another place might have some disadvantages ,I personally think our Correct pronoun usage
our life
life
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worth
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a bit risk-taker .Change the verb form
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