Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays,globalization make numerous opportunities for individuals to move to
another
cities or nations around the globe.Correct quantifier usage
other
However
,there is a majority of citizens who
prefer to keep living close to their birthplaces.I profoundly trust that spending the rest of our lives close to birthplacesplaces could deteriorate our futures.In Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
,essay some pros and cons will be provided,before a logical conclusion is drawn.
On one hand,this
contain
several benefits.Change the verb form
contains
First
of all,individuals who decided to keep their lives close to their birth places
have Correct your spelling
birthplaces
this
chance to meet their parents and relatives , so they would not get homesick ,and they mostly feel self-confidence
.Replace the word
self-confident
For instance
,once they come back home,there are parents who have been
enthusiastically waited for them with a warm welcoming hello.Unnecessary verb
apply
Secondly
,they could flourish their profession in their birth places
or even they will be able to enhance their hereditary jobs which Correct your spelling
birthplaces
has
inherited from their parents and grandparents.Change the verb form
have
Moreover
,they believe spending the
whole Change the word
their
life
close to Correct article usage
the birth
birth place
Correct your spelling
birthplace
bring
them Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
through
more prosperity and joyfulness in Change preposition
apply
life
.
On the other hand
,there are numerous disadvantages which should be considered.First
,living close to their birth
places could deprive individuals of gaining new experiences especially if they are living in a less-developed country I mean the
Correct article usage
a
third
-world country.Secondly
,mostly being near Correct pronoun usage
their birth
birth place
Correct your spelling
birthplace
make
them become dependent people who could not make their Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
Correct your spelling
decisions
descisons
on their own.Correct your spelling
decisions
In addition
,they might experience a being adequate and awful feeling .For instance
, a recent poll by Canada magazine found that most the
immigrants suffer from mental diseases Correct article usage
apply
such
as depression and Parkinson
.
To conclude,spending Change noun form
Parkinson's
rest
of Correct article usage
the rest
life
close to where we were born Add the particle
to conclude
conclude
Correct subject-verb agreement
concludes
in
Change preposition
with
the
number of pros and cons .Correct article usage
a
Although
living rest
of Correct article usage
the rest
life
in another place might have some disadvantages ,I personally think our Correct pronoun usage
our life
life
worth
Add a聽missing verb
is worth
to be
a bit risk-taker .Change the verb form
being
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