Many people argue that due to widespread internet accessibility, libraries are not necessary anymore. Do you agree or disagree?

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lifestyle, we can say
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E-books. There is a debate going on among people, of which some think, due to easily
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offline reading in
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agree with
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Wide Web you can easily get any kind of data, irrespective of the study genre. Some individuals think that there is no need
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with large shelves and study tables, as they think, it becomes very easy and fast to get numerous informative materials on the web. They believe that setting up
libraries
is wasting of resources, and the utilized expense should be utilized somewhere else to get the other benefits. Why I disagree with
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some reliability
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, by
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benefits
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benefit
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libraries
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