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It is argued that the parents of children who break the rules should be punished in some ways as parents are responsible for the children’s actions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Children
's behaviour is part of
kids
 learning, and
parents
 have a responsibility to pay attention to their
kids
, be cautious
to
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observant and do the right things. From my point of view that I agree with punishing their heir by their own
parents
, but it should in conditions. The action of
children
 mostly come from mimetic vision, which watches surrounding people,
teaching
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 from home or school and copying from online media.
Accordingly
, the duties of
parents
 must have to talk in
terms
 and teach in primary, about what to do in daily life, including imposing conditions when there misbehave. Should impose the conditions with reasoning with their child, if they act mistake in sometimes,
parents
 will warning. But they are doing a mistake several times
,
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 and must have infliction in each case. All of the above, in ,
terms
do
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 not harm
children
, should be talked about the reasons before and after punishment, to explain the reason why have
punished
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. Punishment at the present time has plenty of definitions from teaching discipline to aggressive torture, in
terms
 of teaching discipline can consult with a
kids
' psychologist to suggest how to punish in the right way.
Moreover
, aggressive torture is abusing a child, affecting them mentally and physically, from their acting and wording. The acting of
parents
 conducts the behaviour of
children
 in the future. In my opinion, I prefer to agree with punishing
kids
 if their break the rules, in
terms
 of no abusing and having a consult before inflicting, that does not affect them mentally and physically.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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