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Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Raising the price of petrol for vehicles and other
transportation
 is one of the best ways for some
people
 who believe that can solve environmental problems. I would like to share some of my opinions about it.
First
 of all, I agree that increasing the
cost
 of fuel for
cars
 and other vehicles is one of the best ways to solve environmental problems because nowadays there are too many
cars
 running on the streets. Almost everyone has a car and does not like to use public transport because it is difficult to go to work by bus or metro ,especially from a suburb.
However
, if the government can raise the price of petrol and make their
transportation
 systems more friendly, it will make citizens and tourists use it generally due to the financial concerns.
Secondly
, the government can make some packages for
the
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public
transportation
 to inspire
people
 to take
them
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instance
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 of driving their own
cars
.
For example
, if
people
 can get
discount
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from
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 taking public
transportation
, they will be willing to do it from time to time.
Besides
, between different places, the governments can build systems for
people
 to bike, if it is convenient for everyone to rent bikes from one place and return to another, it will be more and more popular for
people
 to use
it
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 and make the environment friendly.
On the other hand
, it is not only because the
cars
 produce too much carbonatite but
also
 many other facts. Due to many studies, climate-changing is
cost
 by many different issues which include making products related to meat, factories, agriculture...etc.
Therefore
, all of the facts
cost
 different levels of environmental problems and it all results in
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climate change
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climate-change
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. In conclusion, though there are many issues
cost
 the environmental problem, I believe it will have a good result if the fuel price increase and everyone will definitely be concerned about the
cost
 and make new methods to
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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