Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to reset the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the contemporary world, hard work is considered
as
an unavoidable ingredient for success; Change preposition
apply
on the other hand
, finding time Linking Words
of
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to
relax
is no less significant. There are Change the verb form
relaxing
plethora
of options available to relax, Add an article
a plethora
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however
the Add a comma
,however
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intensity
intesity
of relaxation varies by activity and individual. Correct your spelling
intensity
This
essay will discuss both views together with my viewpoint.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite