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Some experts say for road safety cyclists should pass a test before being allowed on public roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 has become significantly important these days, especially after the arrival of driverless cars introduced by Tesla, many people seem worried about being safe on the roads for
cyclists
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 because of the high level of caution required for them. A prior knowledge test is the best consideration for
cyclists
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 to pass prior to being physically present on the
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. I agree with
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 suggestion because it can benefit not only the
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 but
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the drivers of heavy vehicles.
Cyclists
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 should pass a test before coming on the
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 because it will help to show what level of
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 precautions and
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 knowledge they already have before issuing them permission to ride a cycle.
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, the test would most probably be based on the proven strategy to assess the skill and
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, it will not be a difficult task to follow by the
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 services as they have already in a practice to do so rather than inventing new ways to do that.
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 needs to be addressed before making it compulsory for
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 to give exams. Another benefit of sitting in an exam prior to riding cycles on the
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 would be that the government will take
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 opportunity to create awareness among people who like to ride bicycles on the
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, to be more conscious and take precautions.
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 it may not draw attention from people or they may not take it seriously that
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 should be given exams like other drivers, it is the responsibility of the officials to make that happen and make sure that
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