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Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

#business #offices #governments #places
Nowadays, one of the widely discussed issues is that local
government
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 have been banning smoking
in
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everywhere
especially
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 in
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the workplace
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workplace
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 and public areas. Personally, I tend to consider that
this
 point of view is well grounded,
however
 according to some should be prohibited in all spots.
First
 and foremost it is well-known, in public areas all
of
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individuals
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the individuals
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 have not been able to smoke since most
of
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laws
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the laws
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 were created to ban smoking . Take Arabic countries as an example, in Dubai, according to the law , all
of
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people
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the people
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 do not manage to do
such
 activities , even
they
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if they
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 will be
tourist
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,
they
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should pay taxes as a punishment if they smoke a cigarette in some place
where
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 is extremely crowded. Another oblivious
benefits
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 of
this
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is
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 that
veto
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the veto
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 of smoking is
effective
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an effective
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 method to stay healthy.
To begin
 with, it can
be cause
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 to
develop
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many
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 serious deceases especially lung sicknesses which are becoming more common among not only elders but
also
 the huge amount of illness is
interested
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 among youngsters since they have a longing to smoke in
the
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 adult ages.
Therefore
 they will have
a
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lung
sickness
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sicknesses
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such
 as cancer and asthma .
For example
, scientist
Mr.
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 David found that smog which is emitted by cigarettes
,
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 are so harmful
for
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human
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a human
the human
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 who
are
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next
 to
the
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smokers
thus
, they will get about 90 per cent of
negative
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the negative
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 effects of cigarettes ,
however
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the
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smokers will obtain only ten
percent
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 of it
for
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this
 reason, it is banned in
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most
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mostly
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most
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 places all over the world. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that most
of
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countries
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the countries
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is
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 forbidden smoking in overcrowded areas. In my opinion, it opens the door to
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more beneficial effects.
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