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Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

#business #offices #governments #places
Smoking is becoming popular even though it is harmful to the smoker and the people around him.
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, smoking has been prohibited in all public places in many nations.From my point of view, I
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 consider both sides.
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 the one hand, smoking is
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tobacco.It is one of the causes of risk factors for chronic diseases according to the World Health Organization. It can lead to chronic respiratory diseases and transmit the
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 not only to those who smoke but
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On the other hand
, avoiding  smoking in the offices should be warned as it can annoy
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the environment and cannot be a healthy area to work happily.The governments should take an action
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 smoking in all public areas as it can be dangerous for young children and pregnant mothers. It can
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That is
 why governments and companies should allow smoking in public places.   In
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 that having weighed everything mentioned
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