You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Saman,
I received your letter
which
you request me Change preposition
in which
an advice
to take a decision either to enter a college for higher education or Remove the article
advice
a piece of advice
a bit of advice
a
find a Correct article usage
apply
job
.
I believe that you may have a job
rather than having a further
boring education according to experience
of myself. I entered Correct pronoun usage
my experience
to
Change preposition
apply
a
high school to take Correct article usage
apply
further
Add an article
a further
qualification
and it was boring for me after plenty of years of studying in school.
You can have a Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
job
in the construction field as I engage. I remember that your ambition is to be an entrepreneur in the construction field.
So I recommend to find
a relevant Change the verb form
finding
job
and take experience. It will be more valuable than gathering qualification
in theoretical basic.
Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
Furthermore
, I am happy to say that I could find you a suitable job
perhaps. If you want to take further
knowledge about the field you could attend a Add a hyphen
part-time
part time
technical course if you wish.
Add a hyphen
part-time
This
advice is according my
point of view and you are the person who Change preposition
to my
choice
.
I am willing to meet you Replace the word
chooses
in
Change preposition
on
next
vacation of mine.
Best Regards
SurangaCorrect pronoun usage
my next
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.