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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email * describe where you lived when you were a student at the university * recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation * warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Rose, How are you doing? I hope my letter finds you in good health. I received your letter in which you asked for my advice about your accommodation during your studies at the University of California, where I graduated from.
However
, during my time, I preferred to live near the campus so that I do not need a vehicle to commute.
Therefore
, I lived in Brooklyn Apartments located right at the back side of the University's building. I would suggest you talk to someone at the university who could guide you better about all the hostels and condos located near the campus.
Moreover
, they would know better as most of the building owners keep in touch with university-authorised persons to get more and more students to live at their places. Do try to find a place which is already furnished and has all the commodities, so that you do not need to buy them afterwards.
Furthermore
, try your best to find a room close to your campus. It will save you some bucks. Good luck with your search for a flat. Hopefully, you find the best place. Yours sincerely, Leo
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