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It is said that it is better to get knowledge boys and girls in different schools.  To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is said that it is better to get knowledge
boys
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 and
girls
 in different schools.
This
 essay totally
disagree
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 with that statement. I believe that
educating
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education
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 in the same school is good condition for two genders. Some parents want to separate their
children
 from another gender. But
with
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this
 way, their
children
 cannot go out with others. Nowadays,
government
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the government
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 is
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paying
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playing
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paying
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 more attention for
educating
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education
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 and it
is
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waits
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waited
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 proper answer to
this
. Nearly 80
percent
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boys
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of boys
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 are very strict and they usually do
given
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 tasks
in
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on
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 time. It is
worthy
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 learning for some
girls
 like
lazy
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. And
boys
 have
organizing
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, ruling capabilities. Mostly,
boys
 are
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the leader
a leader
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leader
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leaders
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 of
class
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the class
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 and most of
children
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the children
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 in the class obey
to
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apply
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them.
This
 happened to my brother. He was
very
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a very
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intelligent
intellent
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intelligent
 and strict person among his classmates. He could control
rest
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the rest
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 of
children
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the children
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 and he helped to
reaching
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reach
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 a profitable level
to
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for
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 uneducated
children
. Communicating among different genders is
more
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apply
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essential. Adults should develop their communication with others. They can make plenty of friends among
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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.
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They
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Thay
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They
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 may learn more skills relating to subjects from each other.
Girls
 have
capability
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the capability
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 in learning natural and foreign subjects
as well as
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, as well as boys,
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boys
 are capable of exact sciences
such
,
maths
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as maths
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,
physics
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and physics
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. Two genders can teach difficult subjects for themselves to each other. To sum up, it will be effective that
getting
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get
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 education together for
boys
 and
girls
. Parents should not restrict their
children
 in
an
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assorted
are
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area
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.
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