Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and expect scientists to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes do you like to see in your new century?

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to bring about
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revolution in the world.I am convinced that
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of
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in the world has engaged themselves through, research of discovery about new things or how to improve the existing ones.
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, the high cost and
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and motorcycles, has been a great conscience to many
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can bring out machines and motorcycles that no longer need, the
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of
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to power them but
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, the issues of staying in
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countries will be resolved.
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, I am certain that the use of electricity in many countries will bring out easygoing in there day to day activities.
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intelligent robots will be made
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all across the world.
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parents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Breakthroughs
  • Incurable diseases
  • Rapid development
  • Vaccines
  • Technological advancements
  • Automation
  • Efficiency
  • Cautious optimism
  • Ethical issues
  • Artificial intelligence
  • Renewable energy
  • Climate change
  • Collaboration
  • Global issues
  • Wealth disparity
  • Innovative
  • Economic policies
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