You stayed at a holiday resort recomended by your travel agent. Write a letter of complaint

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Smith I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the service provided by your staff. I was a guest of your hotel between 16.11.2022 and 18.11.2022. During my stay in the hotel, I encountered a number of unsatisfactory

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and was treated with great disrespect by your staff.

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room

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that I stayed

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not the one that I paid for. I was promised a big

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king size

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bed, two bathrooms and the best view that the hotel has.

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the

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wasn't anything like that it had one small size bed with no view and a small bathroom.

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when I told the staff about it they handled the situation unprofessional. The person that I told about the problem said he will talk with the manager.

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he didn't show up after 2 hours so I went to the receptionist and show them the payment method the problem was fixed but the

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was not cleaned. I hope the problem does not happen again to anyone else and the mistake isn't repeated. Yours sincerely

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

186 words

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