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Some people believe books are good, tell us what has influence you the most in your life? Provide advantages and conclusion

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to express my gratitude
on
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 reading the
book
 "Hidden Gems".
This
book
 has influenced my
life
 a lot and is of paramount importance. The illustrations provided about the simple man's
life
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 how heroic he is to his family touched my heart.
Moreover
, the minimal variations in his
life
 had
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 impact on his family generations. While reading it, I felt that the story was written on my personality as it depicted a general man's
life
. How his efforts towards his family are casually treated and taken for granted. I believe
this
book
 not only represents my
life
 but the mass population of men. A person putting his heart and soul to earn a better future for his family is considered a norm. Definitely whoever will read
this
book
 will see his reflection in it as it is based on a true story. Thank you for writing
such
 a masterpiece and looking forward to reading more of his work. Yours Sincerely,
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