Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we live in a time of
changing
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more rapidly than any others.
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, there
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heated debate
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on
change
. In
this
essay, I will discuss it and give my opinion. Some people tend to spend their lives doing the same or familiar things and avoiding
change
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because they desire to enjoy life, rather than experience much stress from changing positions in
workplace
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or
burden
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from daily shifting lives. To be more specific, if one
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to do the same job
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his whole life, he can finish it on a daily basis with high efficiency and quality. So, he can spare more time to do or try almost everything he is enthusiastic about.
On the other hand
, there are
also
some individuals who hold the view that
change
is always a good thing and embrace it bravely, which often could bring extra opportunities for people or more profits for corporations.
For example
, during the period of covid-19, some companies actively retooled their production line to manufacture face masks.
This
change
not only
help
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them make
much
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profits
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,
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but solve
public’s
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fear,
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and worrying
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worrying
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lack
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of masks.
However
,
this
does not mean it is always a good thing.
For instance
, choosing to play
game
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in front of
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screens
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screes
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, rather than do outdoor activities, due to the progress of high technology, is secretly damaging people’s health. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned,
change
is objective, but not always good, individuals should face it bravely and improve themselves
accordingly
and positively. Only in
this
way, can people suit the
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time and keep pace with the times.
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  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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