Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

Dear
Mrs.
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Barrett, I saw your ad concerning your need for your home chores. Since you teach
English
and I want to improve my
English
, we can work out a good deal.
Instead
of paying me in cash at the end of each day of work, we could have an
English
session to improve my writing. I just saw your ad looking for someone to help you with home chores for a few hours a day
next
summer since you are a native
English
speaker.
First
, I'm a decent cook; I have some experience working in a nearby restaurant, so I could assist you with food preparation and kitchen cleanup.
In addition
, I adore animals, so if you have a dog or a cat, I could walk them and train them for you. I like to work with you
next
summer because I am a productive person, and I want to help others and find myself more productive. Regarding my availability
next
summer, I could be available all the time, 24/7. I hope to hear from you back. Yours faithfully
Butti
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But
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Domestic chores
  • Culinary skills
  • Horticulture
  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
  • Flexible schedule
  • Time management
  • Prior commitments
  • Punctuality
  • Reliability
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