Now, many scientific institute conduct research on live animals. Some people regard it as cruel and unnecessary while others believe it is justified in the interest of human walfare. Discuss the two views and give your reasons. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience
Nowadays, a lot of
researcher
carry out their Change to a plural noun
researchers
Correct your spelling
experiments
experiements
on living animals. Some members Correct your spelling
experiments
Correct your spelling
argue
agree
agrue
that it's for the wellness of humans, while others believe it is not necessary . Correct your spelling
argue
This
essay will discuss that although
research causes suffering to creatures, i
believe it Change the capitalization
I
Correct your spelling
enables
anables
investigators to know whether the experiemetory drugs won't be dangerous to humans.
On the one hand, performing investigations can cause pain to different creatures that are used during the process. Correct your spelling
enables
In other words
, different chemicals are injected into their bodies just to find out how the drug would react. This
does not only cause harm to pets but it also
sometimes kill
them. Correct subject-verb agreement
kills
For example
, in Congo, so many monkeys died during the analytical phase of trying to get a vaccine for Ebola and this
caused the
reduction in them. Correct article usage
a
However
, it all paid off in Correct article usage
the long-term
long-term
when it became successful Correct your spelling
long term
thus
i
support the scientists.
Change the capitalization
I
On the other hand
, using pets during scientific analysis gives chance to science people to know whether the medicine will be of
advantageous or not. Change preposition
apply
Correct your spelling
That's
That
Thats
is to say, if the medication is tested on chimpanzees and they do not get hurt or are able to control the side effects, Correct your spelling
That
this
means that the injection or pill will behave the same way in our bodies. For instance
, investigators in Uganda have still failed to find cure
for HIV/AIDS Add an article
a cure
as a result
of no animal surviving to
the drugs administered. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, i
agree that Change the capitalization
I
this
has saved people's lives because the testing wasn't done on them.
In conclusion, even though animals feel unwell during science projects, in my opinion, i
agree that it is the appropriate method which saves thousands Change the capitalization
I
men
and women from dangerous investigations.Change preposition
of men
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