Now, many scientific institute conduct research on live animals. Some people regard it as cruel and unnecessary while others believe it is justified in the interest of human walfare. Discuss the two views and give your reasons. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience

Nowadays, a lot of
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experiments
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experiments
on living animals. Some members
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that it's for the wellness of humans, while others believe it is not necessary .
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research causes suffering to creatures,
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investigators to know whether the experiemetory drugs won't be dangerous to humans. On the one hand, performing investigations can cause pain to different creatures that are used during the process.
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, different chemicals are injected into their bodies just to find out how the drug would react.
This
does not only cause harm to pets but it
also
sometimes
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them.
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, in Congo, so many monkeys died during the analytical phase of trying to get a vaccine for Ebola and
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reduction in them.
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when it became successful
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support the scientists.
On the other hand
, using pets during scientific analysis gives chance to science people to know whether the medicine will be
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advantageous or not.
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is to say, if the medication is tested on chimpanzees and they do not get hurt or are able to control the side effects,
this
means that the injection or pill will behave the same way in our bodies.
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, investigators in Uganda have still failed to find
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for HIV/AIDS
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of no animal surviving
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the drugs administered.
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,
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agree that
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has saved people's lives because the testing wasn't done on them. In conclusion, even though animals feel unwell during science projects, in my opinion,
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agree that it is the appropriate method which saves thousands
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and women from dangerous investigations.
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