Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Parts of today’s society believe that giving permission to

children

to make their own choices

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daily situations (food, clothes, entertainment, etc…) can easily lead to the formation of selfish individuals who only cares about themselves.

However

, others think that making decisions about circumstances on their own is essential. Personally, I strongly approve of the

second

idea.

Firstly

, a number of parents nowadays don’t let their

children

take

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themselves because of

the

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lack of trust. As life develops more rapidly, numerous hazardous subjects are exposed to the child, which leads to them straying

into

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the wrong path.

Secondly

,

This

way of thinking results from the parents’ belief that by making

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decision

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independently,

children

have a tendency to neglect others’ opinions,

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on everything on their own,

consequently

meaning the occurrence of misbehaviours.

On the other hand

, not every person

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this

mindset.

Children

making

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themselves is extremely crucial as parents aren’t going to be around forever to help them whenever they are in need.

Moreover

, because of how much time shortens when society modernizes, people tend to mind their own business, resulting in a reduction in the tendency to think about others.

As a result

, not only

children

but

also

adults have to practice making choices according to themselves. As stated above, I think it is inevitable that

children

soon have to choose everything themselves as soon as possible, as

this

is a way to raise their self-awareness of their

surrounding

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, and

also

serves as a method to support the child’s ability to thrive in the harsh future. On balance, it is fair to say that even though there exists

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that allowing

children

to make their own choices results in a society where people only think about one’s wishes, it is especially important for the child to start to decide on

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matter

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.