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you should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just read an aticle in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your coinith all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your article which you published in
national
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 newspaper"THE ARTICLE". I do not agree with your statement that all
town
centers
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 look the same in my country. It is not deniable that some of your points are correct. As you mentioned, some buildings and streets are similar to one another
such
 as the library facade and the market around it. And each
town
centres
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 has a round park in the middle of the intersection with the statue of freedom fighters of our country.
However
, I completely disagree with the explanation of the same building in each
town
. I believe that all buildings have different infrastructure and front views. Some towns are under development and some are well developed to explore everything in them. I want to invite you to our
town
 for a guided tour as I want to show you all the best things in our locality.
Then
 you get to know all the differences
of
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 each
town
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town
. Whenever you get time to explore our
town
 let me know,and I will help you with all the good places to see. I hope
this
 letter helps you and see you soon. Yours sincerely, Jas
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grammatical accuracy
Paying a bit more attention to grammatical correctness and word choice can make your letter even clearer and more professional.
task achievement
Including more specific examples or anecdotes unique to your town can strengthen your argument and make your letter more persuasive.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph fully develops a single point or idea for maximum clarity.
logical structure
Your letter is well-structured and flows logically from one point to the next.
suitable writing tone
You used a polite and appropriate tone throughout your letter.
greeting and closing
Your opening and closing paragraphs are clear and effectively frame the content of your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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