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In many countries, people like to eat more food from other regions than can be grown in a local area. As a result, much of the food has to come from other regions. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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In several countries,
people
 prefer to eat more
food
 from other regions rather than consuming
local
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locally
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 grown
food
. Doing so, local
products
 are not exploited much and their economy
tend
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 to become poorer. In
this
 situation, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. More often than before due to the new discoveries in
food
 conservation,
non local
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non-local
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products
 are less healthy than
the
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apply
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local ones.
This
because
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 they have to be conserved for the period of their transportation.
Therefore
, with an increased
consume
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consumption
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 of
food
 from other regions,
people
 can get several illnesses caused by the high chemical treatment done by the
food
 industries.
For example
, several cases of
lysteria
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hysteria
listeria
, which is a disease
to
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 the brain,
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occurred
occured
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occurred
 in different individuals after they ate different long termed
products
 from Germany. Another downside of
this
 trend is related to local economies represented by the farmers and the small companies, which are getting poorer and are losing jobs due to the bigger
food
 industries.
Thus
, local resources are not exploited and
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products
 are not consumed enough to satisfy the farmers.
Although
 is true that these
products
 are more expensive than the
one
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ones
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 from the bigger production,
People
 should contribute and help local
people
 work by buying, time after time, some
products
 which are healthier and can help poor farmers keep going in their life.
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