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There is a disagreement on the impact of increased business and culture contact between countries on a nation’s identity. What is your opinion ?

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The charts compare the proportional population structure of different
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 groups of
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 genders in
France
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 and India in the year 1984. Overall, it is noticeable from the graph that the highest percentage of
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 were toddlers and few
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 were elderly in
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 countries. Strikingly, the 0-5
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 appeared to be more than any other
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 in India among
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 males and females, with boys recording a little above 70% and girls nearly 70%. Whereas the highest populated
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 in
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 at the given period were
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group
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 10-15, 15-20, and 30-35, with a figure of nearly two-fifths each.
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, the least populated
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group
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 were the older
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 in the two countries. In India, the groupings were up to 70 and above, with the population of
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 being less than one in five among
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 genders, whiles in
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, it was up to 85 and above, with the figure being less than 10% in males and approximately 15% in females. With regard to other
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 groups, there was some form of
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-related balance in
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,
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, the Indian population structure was in a form of a pyramid, where there were some major differences in the
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 groups as they grow.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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