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The table represents the information about
subway
 systems in
London
,
Paris
 and
Moscow
. It compares the total track length,
number
 of
stations
 in operation, and
number
 of daily
passengers
 among three major European cities. the
London
 Underground
system
 has 408 kilometres of total track length and it is the biggest value in the table. The
Moscow
subway
 ranks
second
.
Paris
Metro
 has the shortest length in comparison with the other two displayed cities.
London
 Underground
system
 has the least
number
 of
passengers
 that use a
subway
system
 on the daily basis. Its
amount
 is 3 million people. In comparison,
Moscow
Metro
 operates with twice
amount
 of
passengers
 every day. Their
amount
 is 6.5 million people and it is the greatest value in the chart.
Paris
Metro
 ranks
second
 operating with 4.5 million people daily.
Paris
Metro
 has the greatest
amount
 of
stations
 in operation. Its
amount
 is 300. At the same time, the
number
 of operating
stations
 of the
Moscow
Metro
 is almost two times less. It's 182. Summing up the data displayed in the chart,
London
 Underground is the longest
subway
system
 in the chart, but it operates with the least
number
 of
passengers
 on daily basis.
Paris
Metro
 is the shortest one but it has the greatest
number
 of working
stations
.
Moscow
metro
 has the least
number
 of
stations
 in operation but it has the greatest
number
 of daily
passengers
.
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