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The table represents the information about
subway
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 systems in
London
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,
Paris
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 and
Moscow
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. It compares the total track length,
number
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 of
stations
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 in operation, and
number
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 of daily
passengers
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 among three major European cities. the
London
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 Underground
system
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 has 408 kilometres of total track length and it is the biggest value in the table. The
Moscow
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subway
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 ranks
second
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.
Paris
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Metro
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 has the shortest length in comparison with the other two displayed cities.
London
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 Underground
system
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 has the least
number
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 of
passengers
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 that use a
subway
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system
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 on the daily basis. Its
amount
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 is 3 million people. In comparison,
Moscow
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Metro
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 operates with twice
amount
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 of
passengers
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 every day. Their
amount
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 is 6.5 million people and it is the greatest value in the chart.
Paris
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Metro
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 ranks
second
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 operating with 4.5 million people daily.
Paris
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Metro
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 has the greatest
amount
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 of
stations
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 in operation. Its
amount
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 is 300. At the same time, the
number
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 of operating
stations
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 of the
Moscow
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Metro
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 is almost two times less. It's 182. Summing up the data displayed in the chart,
London
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 Underground is the longest
subway
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system
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 in the chart, but it operates with the least
number
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 of
passengers
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 on daily basis.
Paris
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Metro
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 is the shortest one but it has the greatest
number
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 of working
stations
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.
Moscow
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metro
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 has the least
number
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 of
stations
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 in operation but it has the greatest
number
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 of daily
passengers
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.
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