Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior, but others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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of the most recent trends of today's world is the upsurge in modern
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. There is a widespread worry that
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will only lead to a myriad of concerns in
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. In my , opinion modern
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has more positive impacts than negative ones in
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, critics may point out that,
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of the most significant drawbacks of modern
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is reduced
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modern ,world there is modern technological equipment.
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as mobile phones, computers,
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, kitchen equipment, etc... The major
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is
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. Nowadays there are so many programs telecast on
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as teledrama, films, news, cookery programs, etc..according to
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addicted the
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because they do have
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to spend with their family members. The same thing es with the phone. On the other ,hand there are a number of arguments in favour of my knowledge.
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of the most preponderant ones is that
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developing social skills has positive consequences for
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in various ways.
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decade so many
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have mobile phones. On
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mobile ,phone there are a lot of apps. Some apps are very useful. And some apps help to connect with other
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as Facebook,Instagram, Whatsapp, etc.. sometimes
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we can communicate with
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who live in another country. It all happens because of the development of
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in my opinion the whole world is focusing to educate citizens about the positive impacts of modern
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. Citizens are being encouraged to spend a significant proportion of their
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on modern
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. In view of the argument outlined above,
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can conclude that despite having some drawbacks the benefits of modern
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in
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are indeed too dire to ignore
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