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Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior, but others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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One
 of the most recent trends of today's world is the upsurge in modern
technology
. There is a widespread worry that
this
 will only lead to a myriad of concerns in
society
. In my , opinion modern
technology
 has more positive impacts than negative ones in
society
.
On the other hand
, critics may point out that,
one
 of the most significant drawbacks of modern
technology
 is reduced
time
gather
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 with family members. For example, In
a
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 modern ,world there is modern technological equipment.
Such
 as mobile phones, computers,
television
, kitchen equipment, etc... The major
one
 is
television
. Nowadays there are so many programs telecast on
television
.
Such
 as teledrama, films, news, cookery programs, etc..according to
this
 ,programme there is a process and crones. So most
people
 addicted the
television
,
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 because they do have
time
 to spend with their family members. The same thing es with the phone. On the other ,hand there are a number of arguments in favour of my knowledge.
One
 of the most preponderant ones is that
,
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 developing social skills has positive consequences for
society
 in various ways.
For instance
, in
this
 decade so many
people
 have mobile phones. On
the
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mobile ,phone there are a lot of apps. Some apps are very useful. And some apps help to connect with other
people
.
Such
 as Facebook,Instagram, Whatsapp, etc.. sometimes
time
 we can communicate with
people
 who live in another country. It all happens because of the development of
technology
.
Lastly
 in my opinion the whole world is focusing to educate citizens about the positive impacts of modern
technology
. Citizens are being encouraged to spend a significant proportion of their
time
 on modern
technology
. In view of the argument outlined above,
one
 can conclude that despite having some drawbacks the benefits of modern
technology
 in
society
 are indeed too dire to ignore
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