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The table represents information about
metro
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 systems in
London
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,
Paris
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, and
Moscow
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. It compares the total track length,
number
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 of stations in operation, and
number
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 of daily
passengers
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 among three major European cities. The
London
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 Underground
system
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 has 408 kilometres of total track length and it is the biggest value in the table. The
Moscow
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 subway ranks second.
Paris
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Metro
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 has the shortest length compared to the other two displayed cities.
London
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 Underground
system
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 has the least
number
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 of
passengers
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 that use a subway
system
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 on the daily basis. Its amount is 3 million people. In comparison,
Moscow
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Metro
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 operates with twice amount of
passengers
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 every day. Their amount is 6.5 million people and it is the greatest value in the chart.
Paris
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Metro
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 ranks second operating with 4.5 million people daily. Summing up the data displayed in the chart,
London
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 Underground is the longest subway
system
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 in the chart, but it operates with the least
number
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 of
passengers
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 on daily basis.
Paris
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Metro
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 is the shortest one but it has the greatest
number
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 of working stations.
Moscow
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metro
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 has the least
number
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 of stations in operation but it has the greatest
number
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 of daily
passengers
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.
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