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The table represents information about
metro
 systems in
London
,
Paris
, and
Moscow
. It compares the total track length,
number
 of stations in operation, and
number
 of daily
passengers
 among three major European cities. The
London
 Underground
system
 has 408 kilometres of total track length and it is the biggest value in the table. The
Moscow
 subway ranks second.
Paris
Metro
 has the shortest length compared to the other two displayed cities.
London
 Underground
system
 has the least
number
 of
passengers
 that use a subway
system
 on the daily basis. Its amount is 3 million people. In comparison,
Moscow
Metro
 operates with twice amount of
passengers
 every day. Their amount is 6.5 million people and it is the greatest value in the chart.
Paris
Metro
 ranks second operating with 4.5 million people daily. Summing up the data displayed in the chart,
London
 Underground is the longest subway
system
 in the chart, but it operates with the least
number
 of
passengers
 on daily basis.
Paris
Metro
 is the shortest one but it has the greatest
number
 of working stations.
Moscow
metro
 has the least
number
 of stations in operation but it has the greatest
number
 of daily
passengers
.
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