Today family members do not eat meals together. Why does this happen? Is this a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays people do not have
meals
with their families due to many different reasons, so I am going to express my opinions about
this
issue. In my opinion, I think it causes
the
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negative effects for a family to not have
meals
together
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because
becaus
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because
they might not
as
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be as
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close as other families which always have
meals
together. When people have
meals
together, they will chat with each other, they will
might
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start with a simple conversation
such
as " I don't like
this vegetables
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why mom always cooks
this
." and the mother will have to answer her child's question, so the connection between a mother and a child has created. The child might share with their parents what happened during
a
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day in
the
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school or the
happiness
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things while eating together.
In addition
, it is easier to get
connection
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a connection
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with people
by
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through
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food especially in a family because it is common to find a
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typical
tipical
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typical
meal in a family if they always eat together, they must have to same memories
for
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the
meals
.
However
, it is getting harder and hard nowadays
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because
becasue
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because
the children have grown up and
move
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out for working or
studying
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. It is far away from their
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hometown
hometowns
hometwon
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hometown
so it is getting less and less to have
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a meal
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meal
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together.
Therefore
, it becomes a common reason for everyone not to go home to have
family
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a family
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reunion
then
the members lost their connection with each other due to
live
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in different
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environments
environment
enviroments
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environments
. Overall, I believe that even though
those reason
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that reason
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such
as
busy
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being busy
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at work,
study
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studying
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out of town etc. It can be possible to have a family reunion to make every family member
having
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have
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dinner or an afternoon tea together to make the relationship closer.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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