Today family members do not eat meals together. Why does this happen? Is this a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays people do not have

meals

with their families due to many different reasons, so I am going to express my opinions about

this

issue. In my opinion, I think it causes

the

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negative effects for a family to not have

meals

together

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because

becaus

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because

they might not

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be as

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close as other families which always have

meals

together. When people have

meals

together, they will chat with each other, they will

might

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start with a simple conversation

such

as " I don't like

this vegetables

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this vegetable

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why mom always cooks

this

." and the mother will have to answer her child's question, so the connection between a mother and a child has created. The child might share with their parents what happened during

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day in

the

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school or the

happiness

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things while eating together.

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, it is easier to get

connection

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a connection

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with people

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food especially in a family because it is common to find a

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typical

tipical

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typical

meal in a family if they always eat together, they must have to same memories

for

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the

meals

However

, it is getting harder and hard nowadays

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because

becasue

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because

the children have grown up and

move

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out for working or

studying

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. It is far away from their

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hometown

hometowns

hometwon

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hometown

so it is getting less and less to have

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a meal

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meal

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together.

Therefore

, it becomes a common reason for everyone not to go home to have

family

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a family

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reunion

then

the members lost their connection with each other due to

live

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in different

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environments

environment

enviroments

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environments

. Overall, I believe that even though

those reason

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such

busy

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at work,

study

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out of town etc. It can be possible to have a family reunion to make every family member

having

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have

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dinner or an afternoon tea together to make the relationship closer.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Relevant & specific examples

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Include an introduction and conclusion

Topic: Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages? You should write at least 250 words.

In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models', and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Does the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is something said that people who do work that is physically hard should be paid as much as people who do work that needs high level qualifications. Do you agree or disagree?

Leisure is a growing industry. Nowadays, more of modern technology is used in entertainment, which may lead people to be less creative. Do you agree or disagree? state your view with examples.