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1. You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: o What the gadget is o What you think about it o Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

#gadget #home #friend #advice #alternatives
Dear Sam, Hope you are doing well. I was delighted to know that you are contemplating purchasing a smart television set like mine and I am glad to share my recommendation to advocate your decision. It is the latest version of Sony's premier collection of television sets.
Moreover
, it has an advanced 3D feature, a voice assistant, and high resolution. The gadget comes along with a plethora of OTT apps and one of the best sound systems. I reckon, it is a state-of-the-art product and one must buy it to enjoy watching the movies because it gives a theatre experience sitting at home. The settings are user-friendly and can be easily learned by the users.
Although
 the gadget gives an optimum experience, it has been priced exorbitantly. You can
also
 check out similar types with different brands like LG or Vivo which are relatively cheaper. Alternatively, you could procure Sony's earlier model because it
likewise
, except for the voice assistant facility. Let me know if you need any
further
 assistance. Best wishes, Devika
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