Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the enviroment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The importance of Economic expansion for every nation was always debatable and now has become more controversial. Some masses believe that industrial development will widen the situation and vanish starvation in the community while others reject

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notion by saying it will evaporate the environment. In my opinion, the latter preposition appears more rational and In

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essay, I will discuss both sides' views with a logical conclusion.

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with, there are myriad reasons which will

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elaborate the trend but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that any increasing elaboration in any field has some consequences which lead to the adverse issue on the other side.

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, Increment in the industrial factories will rose the employment percentile in the outskirt but it will

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have a bad side effect on the environment due to cutting down the trees for the settlement of the factory location.

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, fewer trees with more carbon emissions will affect the clean air of the village. Another pivotal aspect of the trend that developed in the two nations regards their air transportation will hike up the quantity of work but it will increase air pollution which is hazardous for our eco-system and use leftover natural resources. To exemplify, when any international company boost up their work and used international transportation

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a large quantity of fuel is used by them which is another important aspect of natural resources.

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why most nations are concerned about the environmental effects. On the other side, some communities believe that economy of the nation will

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impact the life quality of the folks. if the country will move to the

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developing stage only

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hunger will be removed. To exemplify, when India banned all china's product transportation in the country, its developed badly the market with China and

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India's employment ratio was improved because they offer their native crowd to develop their businesses with the government's help. Meanwhile, the proportion of unemployment vanished.

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many social perspectives are under

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notion. To recapitulates, according to the aforementioned above one can reach the conclusion that the drawback of developing the growth of the country in the environment is instrumental and it widely issues our eco-system.

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, the potential aspect of economic growth in the employment areas should be overlooked either.

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