These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their families with them. Do benefits outweigh disadvantages.
In
this
modern era, moving to a foreign country gaining popularity day by day. Here,the debate is that, nowadays, most individuals
want to go abroad for work purposes and they are also
taking their families with them. This
development has both pros and cons; however
, its pros definitely outstrip its demerits.
To begin
with, there are many obvious advantages of going abroad along with families. First
and foremost, it can be really helpful for people, who find it hard to adjust to a new country. To explain it more, nowadays, many individuals
move abroad for further
study or work purposes.If they can take their families with them then
, they might not be concern
about adjustment and they may not feel homesick or lonely. Wrong verb form
concerned
Moreover
, it can be beneficial for the financial status of individuals
and particular family
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families
In other words
, surviving in any foreign country needs a better job and abundant
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an abundant
Thus
, individuals
can get the support of their family and it will beneficial for every member of family
in terms of career.
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the family
a family
However
, there are some demerits of this
development. Firstly
, family members ; especially children and older people, might face issues adjusting to new
environment. To make it more clear, owing to Add an article
a new
the new
different
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a different
language
, elderly people and children find it hard to communicate with others. Fix the agreement mistake
languages
As a result
, this
can give adverse effect
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effects
to
their mental health as they feel like prisoners.
To sum up, Change preposition
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although
there are some disadvantages, I personally believe that these negligible demerits can be outweighed by merits as they can be helpful for not only adjustment but it
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apply
also
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...