The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The giving maps illustrate the current building of a
college
and the choices for the changes in the feature college
site that is
prepeard
for 2020.
Correct your spelling
prepared
To begin
the choice makers decieded
to remove the footpath in the west of Correct your spelling
decided
building
which makes the car park closer to the Correct article usage
the building
college
. They also
want to destroy the garden which located
above the building and Add a missing verb
is located
footpath
under the garden. Correct article usage
the footpath
This
destruction could lead to makes
the inside Wrong verb form
making
college
bigger and icrease
the building length Correct your spelling
increase
to
the garden.
In Change preposition
of
continuous
we will speak about the changes inside the Replace the word
continuation
college
. In Correct article usage
the peresent
peresent
Correct your spelling
present
situation
3 classrooms exist, two of Add a comma
,situation
the
in the Correct your spelling
them
sout
west and one of them in Correct your spelling
south
Add an article
the north
north east
but in 2020 class numbers will Correct your spelling
northeast
be increase
sharply and lead to five classrooms, four rooms Change the verb form
increase
in
the east side and Change preposition
on
once
above the new Correct your spelling
one
libery
location. Entrance doors Correct your spelling
library
also
Add a missing verb
have also
relocated
and in Add a missing verb
been relocated
new
plan will Add an article
the new
be see
at the bottom of Change the verb form
be seen
map
on the south side.
Add an article
the map
Reception
location Correct article usage
The reception
also
will be changed, in present college
it
located in the east of Correct your spelling
is
college
between two classes, but in 2020 it Correct article usage
the college
located
in front of Add a missing verb
is located
entrance
. Add an article
the entrance
Toilet
Correct article usage
The toilet
also
will changed
and will go to the north side and Change the verb form
change
at the end
, Correct article usage
the libray
libray
Correct your spelling
library
also
will go to the south west
of the building.Add a hyphen
south-west
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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