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The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The giving maps illustrate the current building of a
college
Use synonyms
 and the choices for the changes in the feature
college
Use synonyms
 site
that is
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prepeard
Correct your spelling
prepared
 for 2020.
To begin
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 the choice makers
decieded
Correct your spelling
decided
 to remove the footpath in the west of
building
Correct article usage
the building
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 which makes the car park closer to the
college
Use synonyms
. They
also
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 want to destroy the garden which
located
Add a missing verb
is located
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 above the building and
footpath
Correct article usage
the footpath
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 under the garden.
This
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 destruction could lead to
makes
Wrong verb form
making
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 the inside
college
Use synonyms
 bigger and
icrease
Correct your spelling
increase
 the building length
to
Change preposition
of
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 the garden. In
continuous
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continuation
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 we will speak about the changes inside the
college
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. In
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the peresent
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peresent
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present
situation
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,situation
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 3 classrooms exist, two of
the
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them
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 in the
sout
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south
 west and one of them in
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the north
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north east
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northeast
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 but in 2020 class numbers will
be increase
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increase
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 sharply and lead to five classrooms, four rooms
in
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on
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 the east side and
once
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one
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 above the new
libery
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library
 location. Entrance doors
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also
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have also
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relocated
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been relocated
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 and in
new
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the new
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 plan will
be see
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be seen
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 at the bottom of
map
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the map
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 on the south side.
Reception
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The reception
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 location
also
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 will be changed, in present
college
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it
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is
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 located in the east of
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college
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the college
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 between two classes, but in 2020 it
located
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is located
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 in front of
entrance
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the entrance
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.
Toilet
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The toilet
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also
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 will
changed
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change
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 and will go to the north side and
at the end
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,
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the libray
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libray
Correct your spelling
library
also
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 will go to the
south west
Add a hyphen
south-west
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 of the building.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • architecture
  • renovation
  • infrastructure
  • facade
  • landscaping
  • expansion
  • amenities
  • accessibility
  • pedestrian
  • vehicular traffic
  • demolition
  • construction
  • recreational areas
  • commons
  • atrium
  • courtyard
  • upgrade
  • sustainability
  • commute
  • ingress
  • egress
  • blueprint
  • survey
  • layout
  • zoning
  • modernization
  • conservation
  • integration
  • footprint
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