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Vietnamese (Native), English (Fluent) Develop novel and efficient machine learning models to process the large‑scale
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PCQM4Mv2, which contains more than 3 million molecules Optimize deep learning models to reduce the computation cost by 10% ‑ 20% Improve the architecture and setting of existing machine learning models for graphs to boost the accuracy by 5% ‑ 10% Implemented the Yolo V1, an advanced
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for object detection, to detect various objects
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as cars, motorbikes, and traffic lights on a provided real‑world image
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Improved the implemented
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with recommended tricks to boost the accuracy to 96% Analyzed the
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performance and analyzed types of objects that can create difficulties for the
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to detect Implemented the Siamese Net, a well‑known Computer Vision
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for Object Detection, to track real‑world objects in a provided video
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Optimize the implemented
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to make it more efficient and reduce the inference time by 15 Developed a novel data augmentation method for the Image Classification task by using generative adversarial networks (GANs) Improved the
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performance to achieve 92.468% prediction accuracy on the Pneumonia X‑ray
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Dean’s List award (Spring semester) Undergraduate Research Participation (URP) Excellence Award Reading Technology and Science magazines Learning new programming languages Writing AI blogs
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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